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Biography of a Phantom: A Robert Johnson Blues Odyssey. By Robert “Mack” McCormick, edited by John W. Troutman. (Washington, DC: Smithsonian Books, 2023. Pp. xxx + 232, editor’s preface, introduction, afterword, notes, acknowledgments, index, photographs, maps, illustra-tions, $30, hardback)
I have literally been waiting to read this book
for two decades. Other blues fans and researchers
have anticipated its pub-
lication for twice that
time. McCormick com-
pleted a number of ver-
sions of the manuscript
in the 1970s, but several
factors delayed the
book’s publication.
They include copyright
disputes, controversy
over content, tension
over ownership of intel-
lectual property, questions about fieldwork
ethics, and McCormick’s own challenges with
mental illness. Consequently, the manuscript of
Biography of a Phantom was put on a shelf until
2015, with interest in publication an option only
after McCormick’s death. We are fortunate that
when his estate was settled, arrangements made
it possible to publish the book and also release
his massive amount of fieldwork materials to the
Smithsonian Institution. Editors and curators
with the Smithsonian have made the book’s pub-
lication possible, and they have also released dig-
itized recordings of McCormick’s intensive and
valuable field recordings. The results are a treat
both for those who have long awaited the book
and those newly acquainted with the author’s
work. The book’s contents as well as the record-
ings are also an important contribution to schol-
arship.

Robert Johnson was a phantom to McCor-
mick when he began his fieldwork in the late
1960s. He was largely unknown following his
death in 1938 near Greenwood, Mississippi. The
1961 release of King of the Delta Blues Singers by
Columbia Records was the catalyst that even-
tually literally put Johnson on the charts. A col-
orful, but highly romanticized, album cover
sparked blues revivalists to pick the record from
the bins, British blues rockers covered Johnson’s
tunes, and Frank Driggs’s highly speculative and
even more highly romanticized liner notes cast
Johnson as a legendary even Faustian figure
within blues history. Driggs cast him as a myste-
rious figure, embodying quintessential elements
of the archetypal bluesman. The legend of
Johnson’s diabolical pact has been totally de-
bunked, yet the Crossroads remains vibrant in
blues imagery, even commemorated in sculpture
in Clarksdale. Barry Lee Pearson and Bill McCul-
loch’s 2003 Robert Johnson Lost and Found is the
definitive critique of the Faustian association
with Johnson. The writers reveal how the imag-
ery is related to major misunderstandings of
blues as well as major presence of stereotypical
imagery within blues. They end their critique by
challenging researchers to find the real Robert
Johnson and not simply perpetuate the mythol-
ogized imagery. McCormick’s contributions help
researchers to discover what we can know about
his life history. By his book’s end, McCormick
gives us a portrait of a musician who readers rec-
ognize far more as a real man rather than a
phantom.
McCormick’s contribution is an excellent ad-
dition to other more recent biographies. Some
of his research is excluded in Biography of a Phan-
tom due to copyright disputes and challenges over
who owned the rights to the research materials.
We do have major omissions from McCormick’s
original manuscripts, and the book’s editor, John
Troutman, explains how readers can discover the
content of what had to be excised. Despite some
major editorial cuts, the resulting manuscript
provides readers with an excellent book. McCor-
mick brings readers into his own efforts to dis-
cover biographical information on Johnson, and
he writes vivid accounts of his adventures in find-
ing relatives and friends of the musician in the
decades after Johnson’s death. McCormick dis-
covered that many individuals knew Johnson well
and that they could offer vivid memories of their
interactions with the bluesman. The phantom
imagery dissipates in McCormick’s book, and we
gain a much better sense of who Johnson really
was as a musician and as an individual.
Biography of a Phantom requires that readers
engage the book’s back story. John Troutman’s
preface sets the stage for McCormick’s twelve
chapters. McCormick follows a thread that leads
him from Hazelhurst to Robinsonville, Missis-
sippi, with stop-overs at points in between. The
trope of the Odyssey works well with McCormick
emerging as a late twentieth-century Telemachus
in search of Odysseus. Throughout the narrative,
McCormick demonstrates his skill as fieldworker,
researcher, and writer. He begins with his efforts
to learn about Johnson in his hometown, but it’s
clear that the bluesman spent little time in Ha-
zelhurst. McCormick then takes readers to nu-
merous towns and cities mentioned in the lyrics
of blues songs and identified with Johnson, a
process that results in only scant information.
Through diligence coupled with serendipity,
McCormick finds his way to Robinsonville. His
careful research blends, and fortuitous, even
quirky, leads bring him right into the neighbor-
hood that served as Johnson’s home base. There
he meets a full cast of characters who provide
him with a wealth of memories and stories. The
fieldworker’s journey and his descriptions add to
the narrative. Readers also gain an excellent pres-
entation of Johnson’s life history. The book is
well worth the wait and is a major contribution
to blues history.
It also was highly edited. There are major sec-
tions that McCormick wrote about Johnson’s
parents and his own family life. Readers will find
sections that make large leaps in biography that
display obvious omissions. This information was
in numerous versions of McCormick’s original
manuscripts, but they do not appear in this vol-
ume. Reasons for the editorial deletions are thor-
oughly discussed in Troutman’s Afterword.
Some of the problems are connected to the need
to avoid republication of material that is already
in print. Other lapses of biographic detail stem
from major copyright disputes. They reveal ethi-
cal problems that resulted in major court cases.
The commoditization of photographic imagery,
interview material, and other resources became
especially rich when Columbia Records released
a box set of complete recordings in 1990. McCor-
mick had made earlier claims to the rights of the
material, but Columbia was successful in the
legal battle. When the compilation sold over a
million copies, the claims for intellectual owner-
ship obviously became even more pronounced.
The award to the Johnson estate took a decade
to be settled, with compensation awarded to
Johnson’s son, Claud Johnson. Tensions re-
mained among relatives of Robert Johnson, and
intellectual property rights resulted in other pub-
lications that played a role in preventing McCor-
mick from publishing his book. Troutman
critiques McCormick’s actions within this dis-
pute. He holds him and other researchers ac-
countable for their actions. At the same time, we
also see a sympathetic discussion of the struggles
that McCormick faced with his failing health and
mental illness. After McCormick died, his estate
placed the fieldwork, manuscripts, and collecta-
nea into the holdings of the Smithsonian’s ar-
chives. Troutman’s careful and conscientious
editorial and curatorial efforts are also an impor-
tant part of McCormick’s story, and we are for-
tunate to have this important legacy made
available for the future.
--Gregory Hansen
Soon Done with the Crosses. By Claude Wilkinson. (Eugene, Oregon: Wipf and Stock Publishers, 2023. Pp. 92. $10.00, paper)
“If there is a seal on southerners that iden-
tifies them as peculiar to all other people, it’s
quite likely our spiritualness,” Claude Wilkinson
remarks in Southern Writers on Writing (ed. Susan
Cushman, Jackson: University Press of Missis-
sippi, 2018, p. 125). Citing passages from his first
poetry collection, Reading the Earth (1998), he
suggests the seal was upon him from the start,
especially in his perception of nature. “Without
the poems’ prevalent inclination toward belief,
all they might reveal is a patient way of looking”
(p. 126), he explains. In
fact, Wilkinson is a
scrupulous observer of
the natural world; and
the woodcut of a dead
bird on the cover of
Soon Done with the
Crosses, his fifth collec-
tion, anticipates the life-
less feathers, bill, crown,
“tarsi” or leg bones, and
“blind / but still bright eye” (p. 6) in his “Cock
Robin, in Memoriam”—a much darker elegy than
its nursery-rhyme counterpart, “Who Killed Cock Robin?”

Worse than the bleak February scene in Wil-
kinson’s poem is the spiritual winter of his first-
person speaker, who “had waited, and waited, /
and waited on God” (p. 6) for three days before
spotting the bird beneath his window. Here, Wil-
kinson evokes the Bible account of Jesus’s fol-
lowers arriving at the empty tomb three days after
his death on the cross; but the closing image of
a “chalky outline / of transfiguration” (p. 6) un-
expectedly relates the bird with its nimbus of
snow to the glorified Christ. The book cover, too,
juxtaposes death with a hope that is repeated in
the gospel music of the epigraph: “We soon shall
be done with the crosses / We soon shall be done
with the troubles of the world” (p. v).
Wilkinson’s sixty free-verse poems speak of
multiple worldly crosses, including war, prostitu-
tion, the autism of a friend’s child, a saint’s mar-
tyrdom, a grandmother’s dementia, and a
mother’s “soft hymns” that could be “gorgeous
with afterlife,” even though they “always sounded
like tears” (p. 26). Readers are apt to identify the
poet as the narrator who shares his thoughts
throughout the collection, but one poem is un-
mistakably autobiographical. In “Posed beside
the Lyceum Marker Commemorating James
Meredith’s Enrollment at Ole Miss in 1962,” the
award-winning Wilkinson—honored as “a visiting
scholar” (p. 33)—is “goaded to pleasantness for
P.R. photos” on the same campus Meredith inte-
grated four decades earlier in the face of much
crueler goading. Long after his own enrollment
there in the late 1970s, Wilkinson remembers
“the tall, stunning / white girl who always
glanced / whenever we passed each other” (p.
33); but he remembers also how futile it was
“then” to dream of “waking on misty mornings
/ to share ripe figs and tea,” even in countries
“like France or Greece.”
The scene changes dramatically in the next
poem, “London Rain,” where the narrator is far
from Mississippi, “having croissants and blood
sausage / with a woman from Australia” (p. 34)
and discussing their individual travel plans in-
stead of the previous night’s riot “over yet
another black man / murdered by police.” The
breakfasting couple is glad to be away from the
“incessant summer heat” of their home coun-
tries, and the English rain parallels the dreams
of misty mornings at tea with a beautiful young
white woman in the preceding poem. But there
is no escape from crosses, as the city’s heat of ra-
cial violence and the speaker’s solitary journey to
Stonehenge imply.
Soon Done with the Crosses is not formally di-
vided into sections; yet, as the successive poems
at Ole Miss and in London hint, the new book
is not a random array. Printed on facing pages,
“Listening to Nina Simone Sing ‘To Be Young,
Gifted and Black’” and “Posed beside the Ly-
ceum Marker” are more explicitly paired, expos-
ing the terrible disparity between Black
achievement and relentless racism in a similar
four-stanza, thirty-line format. Several pages later,
Wilkinson elaborates on motifs of music, suffer-
ing, and race with a trio of blues-related poems,
ranging from the mock-epic mode of “Listening
to ‘Voodoo Child’ While Imagining Sisyphus In-
structing Jimi Hendrix for His Eternal Labor” to
the exuberant wordplay of “Bluesman” and the
poignancy of “Blueswoman,” in which a “now
frail figure / in sequined costume” sings “to low-
down men / who love to roam” (p. 46).
From sea horses to a Tennessee Walking
Horse, animals are central figures in at least half
of the poems; like “Cock Robin, in Memoriam,”
several works express a spiritual dimension
through allusions to myth, art, music, natural his-
tory, and literature. “The Parable of the Snail”
starts with the narrator’s humorous outburst on
the challenge of applying nature’s lessons: “My!
You’re a sticky wicket / of examples of how I
ought to be—” (p. 2). In contrast to the “humble”
snail’s silent and “nearly indiscernible pilgrim-
age” (p. 2), are the intrusions of creatures who
caw, peck, and buzz later in the book in a three-
parable sequence with comic religious references.
Italics emphasize nature’s urgency to convey its
wisdom as the narrator struggles to interpret a
croak of “Eureka!” (p. 63) in “The Parable of the
Crow,” a repeated “Knock, knock, knock!” (p.
64) in “The Parable of the Woodpecker,” and a
song defending “the screech of our decibels” (p.
66) in “The Parable of the Cicada.”
“Birds That Alight on Faith” introduces the
book’s most extended series: seven poems posi-
tioned about ten pages apart, each title beginning
with the same two words. The narrator prays for
a “thimbleful / of aerial surety” (p. 1) to help him
follow a bird’s example and “grasp those things
/ which never collapse / under the heft of this
life.” Despite each bird’s fragility, these poems
frequently serve as a counterweight for the vol-
ume’s “heft” of pain. In “Birds That Sing in
Winter,” chilly sparrows are sustained by
thoughts of spring and the “trusted promise” (p.
74) that they could not “fall without notice /
even in such wincing gloom”; and “Birds That
Abide No Matter” concludes the sequence by
thanking heaven for the meadowlark’s trust in
providence. Nevertheless, in the six poems that
follow, the griefs of animals, earth, and humans
seem so endless that spiritual darkness is the in-
evitable subject of “Vigil,” the collection’s final
poem. Wilkinson turns to Edward Hopper’s
most famous painting as an analogue for “our
being wake [sic] and about” (p. 89) in psychic dis-
tress at a late and lonely hour: “It’s ‘soon / I will
be done with the crosses’ // since we are
Hopper’s Nighthawks here, / snared in our own
all-night café . . . .”
In an eighteen-line sentence spread across six
short stanzas, Wilkinson explicates “our” likeness
to the only three customers in Hopper’s stark
diner: the blue-suited businessmen who “ob-
viously don’t know each other / or care to for
that matter” and the woman who is “so pale and
loveless she looks almost dead” (p. 89). Earlier in
Soon Done with the Crosses, Wilkinson imagines
how cicadas feel during their seventeen years of
“cyclic jailing” (p. 65), and in this closing poem
he keeps vigil with all who feel trapped in our
own solitary snares.
--Joan Wylie Hall
Waking Past Midnight: Selected Poems. By Floyd Collins. (Nacog-doches, Texas: Stephen F. Austin University Press, 2023. Pp. 120, $20.00, paperback)
When I first started reading Floyd Collins’s
magisterial book of selected poems, Waking Past
Midnight, my newsfeed was ablaze with tidings
that Louise Gluck,
America’s most recent
Nobel laureate in litera-
ture, had died. Eighty
years is a goodly span,
especially for one who
remained prolific her
entire life, and there
will soon be an update
to her most recent col-
lected, which spanned
forty years. In Waking Past Midnight, Floyd Collins
offers a half-century worth of poems, the plums
from three collections and two chapbooks that
came out years apart on small presses. Now
Stephen F. Austin State University Press has
made available this selected volume, as well as a
book of Collins’s critical essays, The Living Arti-
fact.

Floyd Collins is a native of Mississippi who
grew up in Memphis, Tennessee, where he played
high school sports and began writing poems in
his late teens. After graduating from Memphis
State, he received his MFA and PhD from the
University of Arkansas. His first two full- length
collections, Forecast and What Harvest, a book fo-
cused on the battle of the Alamo and the men
and women caught in this maelstrom, were each
separated by almost a decade, partly because Col-
lins is a deliberate writer, but also, I suspect, be-
cause Collins has been one of the most prolific
poetry critics of recent decades. Then it was more
than a decade before My Back Pages: The Teresa
Poems appeared from Stephen F. Austin State
University Press. For fans of his work or those
eager to discover a voice that has been in our
midst for a long time without getting a lot of at-
tention, Waking Past Midnight is a welcome entry
among the welter of poetry books released on a
weekly if not daily basis. Collins is no mere voice
of the moment, but a craftsman who has honed
his skills to build poems meant for the long haul.
Collins began publishing in his late teens
and early twenties. This was in the early seventies,
when many poets wrote in a hieratic, lyrical mode
that Collins mastered early. Collins read deeply
among the Spanish and Spanish-language poets
who were only then, thanks to ambitious trans-
lators, coming to wide attention in America. But
Collins, unlike some poets of the time, is always
aware of landscape, and the imagery of West Ten-
nessee, of rivers and even the Delta, and this im-
agery imbues his early poems with a gravity many
of the poets of that time lack.
Collins’s early work is impressive enough
that the reader wishes that he had avoided the
stabs at surrealism that were also an earmark of
the early 70s. Collins’s forte is precise, at times
meticulous, observation of the physical world,
which often pulls the poem into metaphor , al-
lowing something like revelation. So it’s disap-
pointing to see the first poem in the book, an
ode to the Spanish poet Rafael Alberti, sporting
ornamentation like this: “night after night / I
wear a necklace bestowed by nightmare, / beads
of blue phosphor and salt.”
These lines seem the anthemic flourish a
young writer might commit, and these early
poems are very much the poems of a young man,
albeit a preternaturally gifted one. Still, the ref-
erence Collins makes to Alberti’s “elegy for a
man buried with his watch running” sticks, even
forty years after first reading this poem.
A central aspect of Collins’s poetry has al-
ways been the physicality of the world he makes.
Collins does not just see the physical world as a
series of objective correlatives, images to spark
our deepest thoughts, but for the things they are.
The poem “Forecast,” a twelve-line gem begins,
“November is the tombstone / At a wheat field’s
edge.” In a few words, Collins captures exactly
the elegiac feeling of late fall, the look of fields
broken and picked over after harvest, before the
plowing under. The tombstone also reminds us
that in the days of family farms, many people,
sometimes whole families, were buried on their
land, often in the fields that succeeding genera-
tions would work. Such plots can still be found
scattered through fields in more rural areas.
“Forecast” is Collins at his early best. Masterful
as many of these early poems are—especially,
“Piano Player,” “A Last Word,” “The Tree
House,” “Turning the Corner for Home”—one
welcomes the widened scope that comes with en-
tering the poems from What Harvest, based, as I
said earlier, on the battle of the Alamo and the
history surrounding that battle.
This section begins with the book’s first ex-
tended narrative, “James Bowie: Bexar, 1836.”
Any writer, when confronting history or any field
of specialized knowledge, is figuring out how
much the writer needs to tell the reader. For the
poet, this is especially problematic. A poem
needs to deliver its necessary background and get
on with the business of the poem without the
reader being aware of the manipulation. In this
64 line poem, Collins moves deftly between
Bowie’s final circumstances, dying of tuberculo-
sis, his namesake knife bound to his hand with
rosary beads, and Bowie’s past of gambling, bad
business deals, his marriage to the daughter of a
Mexican politician.
Collins adeptly weaves Bowie’s illness into
the tale of making the knife that still carries his
name. “Bowie’s chest labors like a ribbed bellows
/ And again the coals shift and glow white hot /
In the forge of James Black, Arkansas cutler /
and smith.” Collins nimbly handles the narra-
tive’s woven strands in graceful iambic penta-
meter that gives him room to maneuver through
the tale of Bowie’s life. The knife that made him
famous gives him “a handle / The ivory hafted
steel a slick purchase.” Yet Bowie’s purchase, his
hold on the riches of the world, does not hold,
leading to the final illness Collins writes about.
The poem ends on a note of foreboding as Bowie
waits on his bed for death that will arrive either
from illness or the attack of Mexican soldiers.
I have spoken before of the physicality of
Collins’ poems. There are in his lingering obser-
vations, even his recitation of period diction, a
respect for the well-made things of this world.
“Kentucky Long Rifles” is one of the book’s high-
lights, an elegant description of the long rifle,
then a recent innovation in the world of fire-
arms. The poem pans over the rifle, delighting
the reader with language even as it instructs: “In
the buttstock of polished maple / A hinged cavity
hid the greasy, square-cut / Linen patches that
wrapped each leaden ball.” This sort of lingering
observation is not usual in this time when most
written communication takes place in phrases
and illustrations. Collins takes his time and
trusts the reader to follow. After a dozen lines of
dense description, “Kentucky Long Rifles” un-
winds into narrative of the renowned Davy
Crockett “squeezing off round after round,” a
display of shooting that “Showed his Excellency
each morning / How Texas cut the pigeon’s
wing.”
Many poets have based extended sequences
or whole books on historical events. But these
narratives are rarely as grounded in the three di-
mensional sphere of the senses as Collins’s
poems are, and they suffer as a result. The reader
comes to trust the small observations about the
long rifle’s manufacture—“a poised / Sniper
could spill the eye of a gold braided / Zapadore
at two hundred paces”—and those small three di-
mensional images construct a world we trust and
are willing to follow the poet through. Collins
not only did an immense amount of research for
these poems, the language has been crafted like
one of Bowie’s fresh-minted knives. Those not
schooled in the Alamo’s history (from what I can
tell, it is not much studied in schools these days)
might not know some of the more obscure
names and facts here. But be assured that if you
don’t know who Norris Wright or Carlos Espal-
ier are, that Collins does. What Harvest was a
great step forward for Collins’ work as the move
into narrative torqued his already well-wrought
language to greater heights.
The last third of Waking Past Midnight is
taken up by poems for Collins’ most recent book
My Back Pages: The Teresa Poems, a volume focus-
ing on Collins’s adolescence and first love in
Memphis, Tennessee, as well as a portrait of the
changing south in 1970. Again here, we find Col-
lins using narrative and highly charged language,
but the mood here is more meditative, at times
even somber, as it relates two teenagers’ fleeting
romance and later the death of one lover far too
young and the aging of the other although these
poems never descend into self-pity or melan-
choly. As an homage to bygone love, Collins is
walking the same path as Dante in La Vita Nuova
or the painter Andrew Wyeth in his long-hidden
series of Helga paintings.
“Still in our teens,” begins “Expiation,” a
poem dedicated to Teresa Shuler, “we walk the
back paths / Of Overton Park, looking for a
place,” an opening which recounts the perma-
nent dilemma of teens too young or poor for cars
and no recourse to places away from adult eyes.
The poem’s pivot to an image of falling leaves
foretells the end of the romance. The speaker has
tried to be rid of such memories, but as the poem
ruefully notes, “It remains that brief season that
transpired in another age.” The remainder of the
collection takes us through that season as well as
following some unexpected detours.
“The Ghostly Heart” is one of several poems
that Collins bases on music and especially Mem-
phis musicians. Furry Lewis plays slide with a
“pocketknife of dimpled bone” for a group of
boys who bring him a pint of whiskey. W.C.
Handy, Robert Johnson, and Elvis Presley put in
appearances as well, but Teresa Shuler is never
far: “I wanted to make your name / A byword for
all things of beauty and grace.”
The Teresa poems require narrative, and it
can be difficult to maintain the standards of lan-
guage that Collins set for himself in “Forecast”
or “Kentucky Long Rifle.” The first two lines of
“The Machinery of Night” stumble a bit in set-
ting the scene, but the poem recovers nicely as it
progresses through a description of the poet’s
father setting type for the Memphis newspaper,
the trade he took up after being unable to com-
plete his dental studies. “While only a youth,”
the poem begins, “I visited the composing /
Room of the Memphis Commercial Appeal.” The
prosiness of these lines does not prepare us for
the description of his father’s “beautiful square
hands” loading “slugs of hot lead” into the lino-
type machine.
“Load every rift with ore,” was John Keats’s
advice to poets, and it seems to be advice Collins
has taken to heart. Over and over reading these
poems, readers will be brought up short by the
transformative powers of Collins’ imagery and
his metaphor making. In “Narcissus to the
Muse,” a description of his elaborate prepara-
tions for high school—“It was for you, Teresa, that
I put on the pleated / Oxford cloth shirt with the
button down collar”— is compared with his dress-
ing for the day now—“I shrugged on my wool car-
digan”—before launching into a memory of high
school sports and the inevitable passage from
those years. “Farewell,” a poem placed early in
the sequence, tells us that Teresa “died in the
days before the autumn equinox / Twenty-five
years after our short liason.” The speaker, un-
aware of his former love’s demise, describes him-
self as “slumbering,” but says of Teresa, “She, too,
sleeps on a little past the dream.”
Floyd Collins is an artisan of language. We
may have no one who chisels and sculpts lan-
guage as precisely as he does. In this generous,
yet carefully curated, selected poems, Collins pro-
vides example after example of what language is
capable of. Young poets would do well to look
here for guidance. Widespread attention has
eluded Collins, perhaps because his books of
poems come infrequently, and his career did not
lead him into the favor-trading world of writing
programs. Waking Past Midnight may or may not
change that, but this is a book built of poems
that will endure and long after the time of this
writing, people will discover and marvel over the
poems of Floyd Collins.
--Al Maginnes
Fellow Survivors: New and Selected Poems. By Al Maginnes. (Hickory, North Carolina: Redhawk Publications, 2023. Pp. 269, $16.00, paperback)
Born in Massachusetts and raised in the
southeastern United States, Al Maginnes earned
his BA from East Carolina University and his
MFA in Creative Writing from the University of
Arkansas. A prolific practitioner of the language
arts, he has published thirteen collections of po-
etry. Individual poems have appeared in presti-
gious literary journals, including The Antioch
Review, Arkansas Review, The Georgia Review, The
New England Review, Poetry, and Tar River Poetry.
He is a recipient of the John Ciardi Award from
the University of Arkansas Press and a grant from
the North Carolina
## Arts Council. Maginnes
is also an aficionado of
popular music, which is
evident in his poem for
Delta bluesman Robert
Johnson titled “Love in
Vain,” perhaps the most
poignant entry in the
selections from Sleeping
Through the Graveyard
Shift. The two hundred and sixty-two pages of the
volume presently under review, Fellow Survivors:
New and Selected Poems, clearly indicate that Ma-
ginnes has achieved T. S. Eliot’s first criteria for
literary excellence: “abundance.” When my ap-
praisal of Maginnes’s latest book is concluded I
hope it will be apparent that the poet has also at-
tained “variety” and “complete competence.”

Perhaps the finest and most evocative of Ma-
ginnes’s earlier poems, “For a Glass of Red
Wine” conjures the gustatory and olfactory qual-
ities of a vintage that could be a premier cru such
as Chateau Lafite or a more earthy blend like
Black Cloud. The opening lines put us in mind
of a bottle broached by a corkscrew:
I want to reach over and move you
so your smoky odor of crushed grape
cannot drift around me, but
I cannot stop watching the smear
of candlelight reflected on your ruby belly,
bright as the hour glass marking
the black widow I killed in my toolshed
this summer. (p. 78)
The speaker seems to shiver with anticipation so
pure it borders on greed. Note the orotund o and
r sounds in the adjective-noun combination
“smoky odor,” as he rolls them on his tongue like
plump grapes picked from vineyard rows still wet
with dew. He seems entranced by “the smear /
of candlelight reflected on your ruby belly”
(p.78). Like a French Impressionist he depicts
with subtle brush strokes the “ruby belly” resem-
bling an “hour glass” that culminates in the spec-
tral image “black widow I killed in my toolshed.”
Thus, the speaker savors the allure of this
sweet intoxicant but also realizes its fatal poten-
tial. Moreover, he admits to thirsting for more
mundane brews in the ensuing lines: “And I
loved your earthy cousin, beer, / who bears the
brassy accent of wheatfields” (p. 78). Here Ma-
ginnes’s protagonist forsakes the delicate palate
of the wine connoisseur for the “brassy accents”
(p. 78) of one who lives by the rough braille of
his senses. Beer brewed from barley is not pearled
and awakens in the reader’s mind the neon-lit
windows of roadhouses where frosted mugs come
to a head in foam and the occasional brawl:
“‘You could have been killed,’ I’d hear / for the
next seventeen years, after / the car wrecks, bar
fights, [and] nights in jail” (p. 79). Oddly enough,
the poem that began as a paean in the vein of
Emily Dickinson’s “I taste a liquor never brewed”
culminates in a sobering dirge for the aftermath
of youthful excess: “tiny cyclone / in the clear
barrel of a syringe, swirl now / of my wine-col-
ored blood in tubes taken / to be tested or meas-
ured, to tell me / how far this new disease has
marched” (p. 79). But “For a Glass of Red Wine”
is no temperance sermon nor is it Maginnes’s in-
tention to point a moral or adorn a tale. His clo-
sure seems one of wistful remembrance:
but one scent of your dry breath
can make me thirst again
for the cup after cup I emptied,
searching, I thought, for the pearls
some kings used to hide in wine
for favorites of the court to find,
round and drowning
and, briefly, the color of blood” (p. 80)
The fifth and sixth lines quoted above capture
the full-flavored cadences of Yeats’s “Sailing to
## Byzantium.”
Maginnes embraces a Whitmanesque urge
toward cataloguing and prefers expansive narra-
tives that embrace the phenomenal world and en-
able him to name the numinous particulars that
abide in the rich marrow of day-to-day living. In
“Before Electricity,” the poet’s metrical register
lilts trippingly throughout the opening lines:
“Evenings then were music, saw-grass rasp / of
fiddle, thumb and horn-tipped fingers // frailing
a reedy banjo, or spinning forth / of words un-
spooled like thread to repair // the simple fabric
lives were clothed by” (p. 75). The sibilant s-
sounds in “saw-grass rasp” connote the amber
rosin block and bristling bow, an aural device
countered by the bass note inherent in the locu-
tion “thumb.” Even more arresting is the expres-
sion “horn-tipped fingers” that plays into the
phrase “frailing a reedy banjo.” Stylistically, Ma-
ginnes resorts to Old English kennings revived
by the Irish Nobel laureate Seamus Heaney,
which in the latter’s case was intended to evoke
the turf-fire snugness of the Gaeltacht in North-
ern Ireland. Maginnes likewise strives to convey
the creatural existence of his protagonists living
in a time before incandescent bulbs lit Trans-Ap-
palachian homesteads along the Blue Ridge
Mountains: “but more than one might have
yearned / for the forgiveness smeary oil-light
granted, / a glow built as much from shadow as
illumination” (p. 75). Perhaps he envisions a
woman weary from hours spent at a butter-churn
or cider-press shrugging off her dress of printed
flour sack fabric and letting her “stiff hair fall”
(p. 75). The last thing her husband sees when she
slips beneath the patchwork quilt of their iron
feather-bed is: “the mute instrument in the cor-
ner” (p. 75). Doubtless his hands slide along the
curve of her spine as easily as they did the pearl
inlay of the banjo’s fingerboard.
“Electricity: A Requiem,” occurs much later
in Maginnes’s oeuvre and amounts to series of
apocalyptic scenarios not intended for the more
delicate sensibilities typically drawn to poetry.
But its opening segments appear benign com-
pared to what follows: “Wanderers learned how
/ to carry fire with them, / not sensing yet that
its warmth, its gift of vision would lure us / into
building hearths / to cast our bodies beside” (p.
204). The Promethean tone promises an amelio-
rating warmth, the solace of heat and light, if not
ceremony, to ancestral tribes who seek a familiar
dwelling. But with a local habitation and a name
come the inevitable pitfalls of what passes for civ-
ilization. Maginnes relates how Mississippi and
Louisiana “elected / to buy electric chairs that
could be taken around the state rather than
house / the soon-to-be-dead in Parchman / or
Angola” (p. 204). Notice how the poet generates
a macabre homophone through his juxtaposition
of “elected” and “electric chair.” The poet offers
us sotto voce a scathing cultural critique as the
good people of the community gape like bump-
kins at a carnival: “Crowds would come to watch
the chair unloaded. The / executioner would
hire an electrician / to wire up the chair.” (p.
205). However, Maginnes initially denies us the
specter of the convicted soul crowned with elec-
trodes and banged out of his leather straps once
the switch is thrown: “In some towns there were
concerts and picnics. / Church bells would toll
/ as the hour approached” (p. 205). Meeting-
house belfries reverberate for miles around as
bronze bells tongue twelve and the state-sanc-
tioned homicides are carried out. Doubtless, the
corpses will be dumped in a potter’s field. Ma-
ginnes’s indictment of these casual slaughters is
fraught with irony as afternoon sublimes into
evening: “men and women turned from / the
mid-day execution / to walk home for quiet cop-
ulations in shade-cooled houses” (p. 208).
The new poems in Fellow Survivors are rich
and various in their subject matter. Each entry
lends deeper insight into Maginnes’s personal
concerns and ranges from actual events to anec-
dotal observations. He spent four years living in
the shadow of Fayetteville’s Mount Sequoia, but
managed to assimilate the influence of previous
University of Arkansas MFA candidates such as
Jack Butler and Frank Stanford, thus emerging
with a voice and vision undeniably his own. Ma-
ginnes’s signature style ranges from expansive
narratives to poems characterized by a searing
lyric acumen. “Light Has Two Tasks” emerges as
a salient case in point:
Moonlight only serves for shining the edges
of things already dark. Curved fender
of a fresh washed car. Crown of a gravestone.
Crescent of a knife two boys use
to open their thumbs and press the wounds
together
the pale scars insignia of a bond
they cannot explain or express. (p. 27)
He captures in the expression “Curved fender /
of a fresh washed car,” the sponge-buffed contour
of a ’53 Desoto. Genuine moonlight gleams
along the hood ornament. Then the poet shifts
to the metonymic “Crown of a gravestone” and
appears loath to concede that a monarch lies be-
neath it. The ritual nick that seals a bond be-
tween two youths implies that pain is its own
signature, fresh and blinding decades after the
fact. The cursory nod to the title poem of Frank
Stanford’s first volume titled The Singing Knives
(1971) is unmistakable but Maginnes is no devo-
tee prone to slavish imitation. His youthful pro-
tagonists lie beside pulsing embers that shift and
glow in the surrounding dark until he dispels the
enchantment with one extraordinary line: “Day-
light shrinks the world. Birds call” (p. 27). Some-
thing inchoate compels these lads to linger beside
the heap of sticks kindled by their own hands:
“The boys emerge out of night’s possibility / into
flat light, linger beside // the cooling ashes
though they are hungry / and expected in their
unpredictable homes” (p. 27).
Maginnes’s most engaging poems are confes-
sional in nature and deal with themes ranging
from social status to alcoholism. In “Blue Collar”
he contrasts his father’s desire to transcend his
class origins and the apparent indifference with
which the poet contemplates such nice distinc-
tions. He recalls his parent’s natty attire by con-
juring the “ice-blue Oxford” worn only on
Fridays when his finer apparel is at the cleaners.
Ironically, the color motif evokes the demeaner
of one who is cool and aloof rather than prone
to labor in the grease pits of service stations. Ma-
ginnes harbors no disdain for working stiffs who
wear “grease-mapped shirts” or whose hands are
callused from cracking the lugs on tires driven by
those who can afford SUVs. While his father
urges mastery of “decimals and fractions,” he
prefers “radio songs” and the social revolution
foretold in the black columns of “underground”
newspapers. But he also remembers “the frayed
shirts with company logos / and names stitched
over the pockets” (p. 148) that both confer iden-
tity and produce an ineffable fatigue in the care-
worn patriarchs of working-class households.
Maginnes recalls “friend’s fathers as they came
home / from the bottling plants or the mill with
no good words to say / who opened cans of
sweating beer and slowly / unlaced their shoes”
(p. 148). Apparently, unremitting toil produces
choler of a different hue than the poet alludes to
in his title. In a book-length poem titled Dry Glass
Blues the poet chronicles the woes of excess in
language appropriate to his subject matter. The
speaker laments his inability to drink with discre-
tion and concludes that he must either abstain
or indulge. Naturally, the youthful protagonist
opts for the latter course, and the consequences
provoke both raucous laughter and bitter regret.
Perhaps Maginnes’s greatest asset as a poet resides
in his knack for sustaining a lengthy narrative re-
plete with striking images and metaphors. Cer-
tain passages own the table-pounding cadences
of a drunken rout while others are deeply intro-
spective. Regarding a friend’s 33 rpm disc he re-
marks: “But when I heard Mississippi John Hurt
play / ‘My Creole Belle,’ I listened to it half-a
dozen times / in a row wordlessly joyed by that
simple blend / of dry voice and fingerpicked gui-
tar” (p.105). Al Maginnes’s Fellow Survivors: New
and Selected Poems is a veritable tour de force by
one of our finest poets.
--Floyd Collins